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Post by insomniac on Aug 24, 2007 17:36:58 GMT -5
Link: thesims2.ea.com/exchange/story_detail.php?asset_id=180983My new story, if looks could kill ;D (Please give advice for improvement) ;D Andrew Green has been in intense training all his life. His parents have taught him every thing from strategy to attack, and yet he still doesn't know what he's preparing for. What he does know is it has to do something with the portrait of a man that goes everywhere the family moves; which is to say a lot as they do almost monthly. As the family makes a routine move to the small city of Lake View, Andrew meets Lindie: a girl who could challenge everything he's been raised for.
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Post by .JJ. on Aug 25, 2007 1:26:04 GMT -5
Yes Yes, I read this..I'll give it a full critique later
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Post by sweetp on Aug 25, 2007 1:33:44 GMT -5
I'm reading it right now! I'll give you a critique later, also.
Love the cover!
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Post by .JJ. on Aug 25, 2007 17:57:11 GMT -5
oh yeah me 2
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